Elevator Pitch revisited

20 July, 2010

Ok…so I briefly talked about the 31 Days to Build a Better Blog.  If you would like more information click on the button below!

This was the Day 1 challenge:

Today’s task is to develop an Elevator Pitch for your Blog. Let me explain why it’s important.


What is an Elevator Pitch?


“An elevator pitch is an overview of an idea for a product, service, or project. The name reflects the fact that an elevator pitch can be delivered in the time span of an elevator ride (for example, thirty seconds or 100–150 words).” —Wikipedia

So…after reading this from Nirvana Mamma, I knew I had to redo my tag line and elevator pitch.  I’m totally and completely inspired by her.

SO, here goes nothing.

This is my new tag line:

Live passionately,

Laugh until your belly hurts,

Love unconditionally.

These have been the things that Fire Husband and I live by for quite some time.  I knew that they had to be incorporated into our blog somehow.

The elevator pitch…that’s a bit harder.  I’ve thought about this, and written it down a million times…ok, not really a million, but you get the idea.

I’m still not really sold on it…but I guess it’s like our blog…a work in progress…any feed back is MORE then appreciated.  I’ve read some of the other pitches, and am BLOWN AWAY…I know that the pitch isn’t supposed to be in the first person…but I’m having trouble with that…I mean, I know that I’m not the blog…but…the blog is me…make sense?  It’s about our life, us, me.

So…here goes nothing {and again…PLEASE tell me what you HONESTLY think}

Welcome to Live, Laugh, Love…Our way.  This is a place to come and be YOU.  Grab a cup of coffee {or wine} and pull up a seat.  Make yourselves at home, and read about the crazy life or an Air Force family.  We’ll share our lives with you, from being a military family, to being a firefighting family.  Sharing our journey in Faith, to our journey as newlyweds.  It’s by no means a perfect life, but it’s OUR life.  The good, the bad, and the ugly, we share it all.  We also do reviews and hold giveaways from some amazing companies!  So sit back and enjoy the ride!

~Much Love~

 

Ok…so there it is…what do you think?  I can’t wait to see some feedback, so I can make it better, and our own!  Thanks for stopping by!

 

Much Love

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